Monday, August 3, 2009

You

I woke up this morning yearning for you

I started my day feeling blue

I thought it’d pass, I thought I’d be fine

Like a fool, I toed the line


Through the day it grew worse

It almost made me smile-averse

The day ended, how, I have no clue

I’m going to bed tonight yearning for you

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10 comments:

  1. UnknownAugust 3, 2009 at 12:00 PM

    eish. this yearning is great oh. please take a cold shower and sleep wai.. hmmm

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  2. The AuthorAugust 3, 2009 at 1:34 PM

    Brilliant, K. It started the same way it ended. Hmm. Please spend a minute to edit..."toed the line"

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  3. KwegyirbaAugust 3, 2009 at 1:57 PM

    Hahaha. I will let 'her' know. I like..."wai"!

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  4. KwegyirbaAugust 3, 2009 at 2:02 PM

    Thanks Nana Yaw. Yes I decided to try one that begins and ends the same way. Never seen that done. Those were my first two lines. Oh and the correction, I "thesaurus-ed" it over and over because I'd never seen the spelling. Thanks.

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  5. UnknownAugust 3, 2009 at 5:22 PM

    mmmm... deep desires huh?!

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  6. ImageNationsAugust 4, 2009 at 12:08 AM

    this is deep, very deep. love it to the max

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  7. Kitchen Floor CockroachAugust 4, 2009 at 3:19 AM

    a yearning heart satisfaction must find or sleepless nights and restless days shall trouble the mind

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  8. KwegyirbaAugust 4, 2009 at 5:06 AM

    Yes Maxine, 'she' has deep desires!

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  9. KwegyirbaAugust 4, 2009 at 5:07 AM

    Thanks for loving it, Nana F!

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  10. KwegyirbaAugust 4, 2009 at 5:08 AM

    Ah Roach, you know that thing!

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